Saturday, November 3, 2007

FAT KIDS



Dear JhonyThank you for you letter, I was sorry to hear about your problem but I can help you with some advice for your problem.

The best thing to do is one diet you need not eat all the chocolate chip cookies you can at lunch vegetables, fruits and vitamint because this diet helping you. Furthermore you should do is lose weight by eating less junk food and drink more waiter too your should buy acupuncture medicine this medicine is cheap and good for your condition of health.As a result of it diet is that if you follow a diet with vegetables and fruits you will can lose weight, moreover you don’t eat junk food and if you drink water you will have a slim body.

I know it’s hard to do at first, but believe me, that you follow my advice to treat good luck. I hope every thing goes will your disease.

Your sincerely.
ANDREA SILVA

1 comment:

ANDREA said...

Maritza dijo...
This is very interesting becuase you took a real situation to write your advice letter. Please revise the rethorical structure, I think there is too much information on the first paragraph. Another aspect you should be careful with is the puctuation related to connectors.